Bài thơ bị sửa đổi và cắt xén

         

     

       Bài "Đừng" sau đây đăng trên tạp chí Văn nghệ Ninh Bình số 66 (3-2009) đã bị sửa đổi và cắt xén:

    

Đừng!

Anh đừng nhìn em tắm

Da em mịn màng trắng

Tóc em mượt mà xanh

Dẫu quanh em và anh

Toàn những cây hoang dại...

Con chim hót mê mải

Ong mê tầm nhụy hoa

Gió theo áng mây xa...

Mỗi mình em đứng tắm

Nước đổ dài đuối đắm

Giọt từng giọt long lanh

Mon men...gò...cỏ xanh...









Bài "đừng" sau đây là  nguyên bản

 
Anh đừng nhìn em tắm
Nhỡ thấy mà...thẹn lắm !
Da em mịn màng trắng
tóc em mượt mà xanh


Nơi chúng mình chung quanh
Toàn những cây hoang dại
Con chim
                 Còn mê mải
Con ong
                 Tầm nhị hoa
Ngọn gió
                 Vừa đi qua


Mỗi mình em đứng tắm
Nước đổ dài đuối đắm
Giot! Từng giọt long lanh
Mon men...
                   gò...
                            cỏ xanh...

               
Vĩnh Lộc 1997

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